Well happy (late) 4th of July to all my fellow Americans on da

I hope you all enoyed some barbaque and fireworks

Now I have an important question: should I post some of my writing?
I know you can't tell, but I actually write a lot. Two of my stories I would consider posting.
The first is called 'Demonica', which i have typed and almost postable. This might surprise you, but it has nothing to do with demons

I might even change the name if I come up with a better title. Its bascially about this girl, Lydia, who's been living in an orphange for the past three years waiting for her dad. Then one day a mysterious boy named Benjamin arrives and changes everything for her....
I don't really want to give too much away, but thats bascially the premise of the story. There's a lot more to it, but for now thats all i can tell you ^^
The second is one of my older stories called 'Impulsive'. Its a sterotypical vampire story that takes a turn for the sarcastic. As the story progresses, its more aimed at making fun of sterotypical books that i see lining the shelves of every book store ^^
So bascially, it starts serious then turns into a comedy with a lot of underlining meanings

Do either interest you guys?
I personally like Demonica better, but more of my friends like 'Impulsive' , even though they only read the serious parts

I have another story I'm working on thats more epic then those two and way longer, but I'm really not willing to post it online. My charcter Noma is from that one and so is the boy and girl from 'Yin and Yang Lovers' ^^
I really hope some people tell me what they think and I get a few comments

Clubs I'm in:

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i am part of a degenerate elite, dragging our society into the street!
...this is necessary; life feeds on life feeds on life feeds on life feeds on...
believes the underdog will eventually survive!
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devil on the edge
And I think Demonica is an intriguing title for your story.
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"Jelly-filled are my favorites! There's nothing like a jelly-filled donut!" Did I mention that it's a jelly-filled doughnut and definitely not a Japanese rice ball??
I don't often read stuff online, but i really enjoyed it!
Thank you for saying that, i really try hard to come up with interesting titles for my stories~
If your interested, i can comment you when i post it?
And titles are the things that draw readers in so they need thought. If Meyer didn't change Forks to Twilight, do you think her series would have picked up as many readers as it did?
Sweet, that'd be neat if you did that
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"Jelly-filled are my favorites! There's nothing like a jelly-filled donut!" Did I mention that it's a jelly-filled doughnut and definitely not a Japanese rice ball??
But I'm starting to read a little more and more online
I don't think I would have read Twilight if it had been named that lol
Good point! Titles and opening lines (as well as the first 3 chapters) have to be really good in my opion, to draw the reader in.
No problem! I'm a little self concious about my writing, so its nice to know people are interested ^^
I'm hoping to have it up in the next few days~
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Becky Loves Christian
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"Qui plus sait, plus se tait. French, you know. The more a man knows, the less he talks."
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